Its nice ,but when I write a story I think its great I tried all the suggested ways that are given, but still after completing it I feel its made up with a lot of mistakes and I get a feeling to just stop it ................................... when I say the stories to my friends in oral form they all like it and when I write it ,its not worth reading .All my friends say my stories are great , but to say it frankly I can not find the correct words to express it . What should I do??????????(I even asked my friend to write the story I made. I asked her to write it as I say the words but this does'nt works either). So help me out friends , what should I do????
Nice post. I would add a couple of bits of advice for those who want to write poetry: the first is that it is very simple - most people don't do it and anything you write at all will impress people. I only write rhymed verse, because it is a bit more difficult but a lot more impressive. (Just my opinion.) A lot of people write four line verses, with the rhyme scheme AABB. If you change this to ABAB it usually sounds much better, and often little or no changes are needed other than swapping the lines. Don't force a rhyme - if you have to end a line with something like "We did eat" then you need to rewrite it, because it sounds clunky. Similarly given a few minutes thought you can generally swap words out and fix lines with too many or too few syllables. If this doesn't work, put it aside for half an hour and try again. While a specific time and quiet surrounding are nice, I write at work in an engineering office, in rapid email exchanges against a group of people who are probably a lot better than I. The best poems are published in the company newsletter, not because they are good but because I am the editor. Remember, don't worry if it's perfect, just keep at it.